I cannot deploy your par, because I have org.eclipse.persistence-1.1.0 (from our previous conversations), and you Import-Bundle org.eclipse.persistence at strict version 1.0.0.
I can supply this, of course, but please confirm that this is intended, and that the pre-requisites:
com.springsource.javax.persistence-1.99.0.jar
com.springsource.org.apache.commons.dbcp-1.2.2.osgi.jar
com.springsource.org.apache.commons.pool-1.3.0.jar
com.springsource.org.apache.derby.client-10.5.1000001.764942.jar
com.springsource.org.eclipse.persistence-1.1.0.jar
com.springsource.org.eclipse.persistence.antlr-1.1.0.jar
com.springsource.org.eclipse.persistence.asm-1.1.0.jar
com.springsource.org.eclipse.persistence.jpa-1.1.0.jar
org.eclipse.persistence-library-1.1.0.libd
are still correct (modulo 1.0.0 for eclipse, if you like).